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©2007-2009 ~DeadSeaGospel
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Sketched out and started shading in college algrebra ;/ finished the last page at home.

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:icongalacticaphantome:
Haha, Dude looks fantastic I love the style, I still think you could push the contrast and values more. However this is the right step man, its awesome, just keep workin on the shadows making things darker and lighter and trying to find that mid tone

Also, you gotta start using Panels man, this free floating stuff unfortunately makes the story way too loose and hard to follow. I have no idea where the line of action is or where in space the characters are.
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I had no desire to do a mid tone for this though technically I did add one for the girl on the last page cause she has dark skin and it did end up looking nice so TOUCHE' mr.washington. Ah man yeah and panels are something I really do need to work on.

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:icongalacticaphantome:
Trust me, Always go for some midtones man! Midtones will always make art pop. Midtones help establish form the illusion of 3-D space which is always good because flat drawings aren't nearly as fun too look at.

Remember those lame ass value charts you did back in first quarter, they really do help if you want to establish your darks, lights, and midtones.

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